Me Write Pretty One Day
Examiners all appreciate a good story.
The entire study was characteristic of being well thought out, well organized and professionally and scientifically conducted. The Thesis (and research) flowed very nicely from one step to the next and told a very nice, needed, related story.
A good story needs a number of ingredients, including real characters, mystery, rhythm, questions, anticipation, surprise, depth, contrast, climax, and The End. While this advice comes from science fiction story telling, it can also apply to telling a good research story.
To add to the argument, I have posted an article called "Me Write Pretty One Day: How to Write a Good Scientific Paper" by William A. Wells.